extreme locomotion
after observing a young violinist
throwing her body into her violin, her hair
flailing like to escape the bonds of her scalp, the bow
burning through the strings presenting a fire hazard,
Jascha Heifetz seemed perplexed asking the youngster:
"why such unnecessary commotion"?
that’s what came to mind while spitting spent
toothpaste into the bathroom sink this morning,
the fallen water spinning like a mad galaxy
into the suck of the drain in much the same
way a black hole works or so they tell me.
some have proposed while others agree
that to avoid the commotion of war
the two leaders of the opposing nations
shoot-it-out in a duel, with the one left standing
declared the winner of the war. the whole war.
I'll clear my head of this morning's suggestions with
one more spit into the sink and done,
after observing the last of it spinning into the drain, that is.
FIX THE LAST STANZA